Long Shadows is an ecohistorical graphic memoir. Let’s break that down really quick:
The graphic memoir genre is what it sounds like– the combination of the graphic novel form with creative nonfiction or memoir. My project deals primarily with environmental history, hence the prefix. Essentially, it’s a comic about my relationship to nature.
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My memoir is an activist work of ecocriticism, meaning that it makes a subject of the human/nature dialectic itself. If environmental crisis is the byproduct of culture, then ecocritical literature completes the circle by addressing crisis.
The memoir has five parts of varying lengths, moving from the personal to the historical and didactic. There’s the story of my grandfather’s rickety mining claim cabin, about the capriciousness of private land and the importance of complicating memory. Then alluring tales from a road trip, deep impressions left of a quote-unquote “real” engagement with American wilderness. There’s an account of a city upbringing, the unstable interaction of imagined and real mapped space, and the belief in entangled urbanity and nature.
From there, the academic takes over. The role of ideology in determining land use leads to Environmental Historian Bill Cronon’s landmark conclusions from Nature’s Metropolis. From Times Square to Yellowstone, all land – including wilderness – is constructed by capital in the image of some desired value, such as the aesthetic Sublime. Finally, Long Shadows describes the tangled and bloody history of an Oregon wildlife refuge the size of Oklahoma, and the lessons of its management. The memoir concludes by drawing together the personal, the political, and the historical.
Transcript
INTRODUCTION
Oh, hey! I didn’t see you there. Thanks for coming to my comps talk! In a moment I’ll hand you over to Cartoon Me, who’ll take care of the rest of the talk.
Hello from isolation in North Carolina! [videos: the author waving and smiling, miscellaneous videos of life in NC.] I’m doing mostly fine; hope you are too. I’m August, recently graduated senior English major, he/they, and this is my entire comps. [flip through comps] The entire thing is available in the shared folder along with its interpretive essay, where it’s probably a bit easier to read.
CRITICAL CONTEXT
Long Shadows is an ecohistorical graphic memoir. Let’s break that down really quick:
The graphic memoir genre is what it sounds like – the combination of the graphic novel form with creative nonfiction or memoir. My project deals primarily with environmental history, hence the prefix. Essentially, it’s a comic about my relationship to nature.
Long Shadows refers to, and locates itself in, the critical school of ecocriticism. In The Ecocriticism Reader, Cheryl Glotfelty writes: “The argument for ecocriticism is simply the argument that literary criticism should respond to the realities of life on earth.” She goes on to say that literature, quote, “does not float above the material world in some aesthetic ether, but, rather, plays a part in an immensely complex global system, in which energy, matter, and ideas interact.” Ecocriticism is the reaction of literature to the ongoing environmental crisis, itself a “by-product of culture.”
MY GRAPHIC NOVEL
My memoir is an activist work of ecocriticism, meaning that it makes a subject of the human/nature dialectic itself. If environmental crisis is the byproduct of culture, then ecocritical literature completes the circle by addressing crisis.
The memoir has five parts of varying lengths, moving from the personal to the historical and didactic. There’s the story of my grandfather’s rickety mining claim cabin, about the capriciousness of private land and the importance of complicating memory. Then alluring tales from a road trip, deep impressions left of a quote-unquote “real” engagement with American wilderness. There’s an account of a city upbringing, the unstable interaction of imagined and real mapped space, and the belief in entangled urbanity and nature.
From there, the academic takes over. The role of ideology in determining land use leads to Environmental Historian Bill Cronon’s landmark conclusions from Nature’s Metropolis. From Times Square to Yellowstone, all land – including wilderness – is constructed by capital in the image of some desired value, such as the aesthetic Sublime. Finally, Long Shadows describes the tangled and bloody history of an Oregon wildlife refuge the size of Oklahoma, and the lessons of its management. The memoir concludes by drawing together the personal, the political, and the historical.
HOW IT ALL CAME TOGETHER
My artistic process involved a large notebook, ink pens and brushes, a scanning app, and digital editing software. Pages began life as typed notes, were storyboarded, sketched, and inked. Approximately 80% of the work took place in a local coffee shop.
The result became a beautiful bound copy courtesy of Print Services.
CONCLUSION
In the months since, I’ve often thought that having completed the year of ideation, research, drawing, and production, I’m finally ready to begin. In much the same way that my comps prepared me to write and draw new ways of existing in nature, Second Laird and my other transient departmental homes – Willis (polisci), Goodsell (ENTS), Leighton (History), and Old Music (Geology) prepared me to read and write myself into the world.
Long Shadows is a first attempt at a story I will be working on for my entire life. It is a terribly short introduction, even to my personal nature stories alone. It passingly references settler-colonialism and white supremacy, but there is so much more reading and learning for me to do. I believe that for literature to have a positive role, it must first acknowledge the stolen land, labor, and lives it, like every other dominant cultural system, rests upon.
I’ll conclude with one of my favorite reflections from my project: The work of complicating [this memory] is often uncomfortable. But if we are to transform our understandings of nature, nothing is sacred. Everything is going to change.
THANK YOU
I’m so grateful for the support of the English department. I have enormous thanks to give to my advisor, Michael Kowalewski, who made time for me every week and always had helpful books to pull off his shelves. Many classes and professors helped directly inspire this project. Susan Jaret McKinstry, whose Critical Methods and Narrative Theory I took, introduced me to Scott McCloud and theories of graphic narrative. In his American Environmental History and American Cities and Nature classes, George Vrtis razed and rebuilt my conception of the American landscape from the ground up. Fred Hagstrom’s Observational Drawing and Dan Bruggeman’s Art in the Anthropocene are responsible for any quality present in my drawings. Kim Smith’s Environmental Justice and David Hougen-Eitzmann’s Agroecology added context and nuance.
I have to stop thanking somewhere, but I hope it’s clear that in just about every way, this was a deeply comprehensive project.
Thank you for listening!
The music was also by me! Find “not knowing” and “twenty nineteen” at soundcloud.com/ augustsoren
Great job, August! I loved everything about it — including the outtake. I hadn’t seen the pictures of the Arb. And I hadn’t seen that stump and that umbrella, either! This project will, like the criss-crossing circles of raindrops hitting a lake, keep expanding and growing. It was a pleasure working with you on your Comps! You’ve helped reimagine the possibilities of graphic storytelling at Carleton. Warmest Congratulations.
Thank you so much Mike!! It was so wonderful working with you. I’m grateful to have gotten the chance to work on this project for Comps, and look forward to writing more. I’m missing my afternoons chatting with you and drawing/writing in Laird already. Thanks again!!
“Oh, hey! Didn’t see you there!” Love that intro!
Great job summing everything up, August. This project is a very creative take on issues that are incredibly relevant today.
Thanks Meggan! I’m really glad it seems topical, and that my humor didn’t clash too much. Thanks again for answering my endless questions about submitting it in book form!
August, This is such a well-wrought video presentation. Thank you for sharing your work. What are your present and future projects?
Thank you so much, Greg! It was so great to get another chance to present my work. I tend to meander while presenting, so I appreciated the ability to edit myself!
Aside from learning how to sew cloth masks and gardening, I’m adapting my family’s weekly Zoom calls into comic strips. I’m not sure what form they’ll end up in yet. I’m also working part-time on the Dacie Moses Story Project, interviewing alums with connections to the house and Dacie herself. (Eventually that will become a podcast.) I’m keeping up my theory muscles too, thanks to the reading group. And of course, the job search.
I loved every moment of this. The whole thing is so fresh and eye-opening, and offers such a great model for how our students expand the boundaries of the discipline. Thank you, August, and congrats!
Thanks for watching, Pierre! I’m so glad you enjoyed the video, and I’m honored by your comments! I’m grateful to the department for letting me explore in several directions throughout the project.
August, I’m so impressed with how beautifully the forms you’ve devised for your project and presentation embody and convey its multidisciplinarity. Fine work; congratulations!
August, I loved hearing your early ideas about this project, and the result is glorious. The presentation shows so well how you thought about, and intersected, these fields and concepts in words and in writing. What a perfect visual form to show your developing thought in action. Many thanks for sharing it with us.
This is an awesome project, August! Powerful, skilled, smart, personal, moving! Congratulations and thanks for sharing in this hybrid mode. If this is a continuing project – keep us in your audience! (Lovely drawings. And I loved the music!)
August you did an amazing job, like always! It was so fun and fulfilling to see your enthusiasm for this project manifest into an actual work of art! I only wish we could be celebrating it together with a nice bonfire in the backyard. Really, though, amazing job at capturing your passion and voice.